The Reminiscent
NoThe scent of smoke filled all terhe corners of the room. It passes under the door of the Room a tiny, grey tendril that tickled Ethan’s nostrils even before the distant, unprecedented shouts are ndoticed. She’d been reading, relaxed in the stretched armchair by the window, the soft radiance of the bedside lamp painting the magnificent hotel room in warm resplendence. Her parents, Pierre and Marie Monts, whispers quietly on the sofa, sharing a nap after a day touring around the historic city.
Then, the unexpected.
The shouts sharpened, translating into words: Fire! Fire!
Ethan's book falls from her fingers, folding onto the thick rug. Her mother gasped, hand flying to her throat. Her father stands up instantly, his easy disposition replaced by an instant alertness. He crossed the room in two strides, gropping against their door. He recoiled instantly, shaking his hand.
“Hot,” he said, his voice tight. “Too hot.” He pressed his ear to the wood. Ethan heard it then – the terrifying crackle, like a thousand dry twigs snapping, growing louder, closer. And beneath it, a low, hungry roar.
“The hallway?” Her voice was thin with terror. She reached for Ethan, pulling her close. Ethan buried her face in her mother’s linen robe, inhaling the familiar scent of gardenias now tainted by smoke.
Pierre held the door handle, flinching back as a wave of intense heat blasted through the narrow opening. Thick, black smoke billowed in, acrid and choking. Through the swirling gloom, Ethan sees a blue inferno raging down the corridor, licking at the ceiling tiles. The roar was deafening now.
“No!” Pierre shuts the door, leaning against it, coughing violently. His face was smudged with soot already. “Can’t go that way. Window!” He rushed to the large window overlooking the city lights. Actually, he wrestled with the latch. It was painted shut, ancient and stubborn.
His spouse dragged Ethan to the bathroom. “Wet towels! Quick, Ethan!” Her hands trembled as she soaked towels under the faucet. Ethan fumbled, her own hands numb with fear, the icy water shocking her skin. The smoke was filling the room, stinging their eyes, clawing at their throats. The crackling roar was everywhere.
Pierre abandoned the window, grabbing the wet towels from them. He shoved one at Ethan's. “Hold this tight over your nose and mouth! Don’t breathe the smoke!” He wrapped another around Marie's face, his eyes locked on hers, conveying a silent message of desperate love and terror. He pressed the last towel to his own face.
“We have to get to the fire escape!” Her husband Pierre shouted over the din. He pointed towards the window. “It’s just outside! We break it!”
He grabbed the heavy brass lamp from the bedside table. “Stay behind me!” He swung it with all his strength against the windowpane. Glass exploded outward with a crystalline shatter. Cold night air rushed in, mingling horribly with the smoke. Pierrr rushed in again, clearing the jagged edges.
Outside, Ethan saw the skeletal outline of the iron fire escape, tantalizingly close, yet separated by a terrifying drop. Flames now licked at their doorframe, the wood groaning and blistering. The heat was becoming unbearable.
“Run! Marie, Ethan , go!” Pierre roared, shoving them towards the opening. “I’ll be right behind you!”
His spouse Marie hesitated for only a second, her eyes wide with terror for him, before pushing Ethan towards the window. “Climb out! Don’t look down! Just move!”
Ethan scrambled onto the sill, shards of glass biting into her knees through her pajamas. The cold wind whipped her hair. Below, the street lights were impossibly small, sirens wailing like lost souls. She reached out, fingers scrabbling for the cold, wet iron railing of the fire escape. She grabbed it, hauling herself out, her heart hammering against her ribs. She turned, reaching back for her mother.
“Ok mummy! Hurry up!”
Marie was halfway out when the room behind her seemed to explode. A ball of fire erupted through the doorway, engulfing the space where Pierre had been standing. A choked cry, swallowed instantly by the inferno’s roar.
Marie's scream was raw, primal pain. She twisted back towards the flames, towards the vanishing shape of her husband.
“MOM, NO!” Ethan shrieked, grabbing her mother’s arm with desperate strength.
It was too late. A secondary explosion, muffled but violent, rocked the room. A wave of superheated air and debris blasted outwards. Ethan was thrown violently back against the iron railing. Her grip on her mother’s arm was torn away.
She saw her mother silhouetted against the hellish orange light for one horrifying, frozen instant. Then Marie was gone, swallowed by the firestorm erupting from the shattered window frame.
Ethan screamed, a sound lost in the roar of the fire and the screaming sirens below. She clung to the fire escape railing, choking, blinded by smoke and tears, the heat searing her skin. Below her, the gaping maw where the window had been vomited flames into the night. Above, the fire raged, consuming the hotel floor by floor.
Hands grabbed her. Strong arms hauled her upwards, away from the inferno. Firefighters in bulky gear. She struggled weakly, her eyes fixed on the flaming hole that had been her parents’ room, her parents’ lives.
“Mom… Dad…” she choked out before darkness, thick and merciful, swallowed her whole.
She regained consciousness in fragments. The sterile smell of antiseptic. The rhythmic beep of machines. The muffled sounds of a hospital corridor. A dull, throbbing ache in her chest, her head, her hands. Bandages.
A woman in a crisp uniform – a nurse – swam into view. “Ethan, can you hear me? You’re safe now, honey. You’re in the hospital.”
Safe? The word was a mockery. Images slammed into her: the orange flames, the suffocating smoke, her father’s desperate eyes, her mother’s silhouette vanishing into the fire. The roar. The smell. The *loss*.
A sob tore from her throat, raw and painful. The nurse’s face softened with pity. “I know, sweetheart. I know. It’s terrible. Just rest.”
Rest was impossible. Her mind replayed the horror on a loop. *Why didn’t Dad come? Why did Mom look back? Why didn’t I hold on tighter?* The guilt was a physical weight, crushing her into the thin mattress.
Days blurred. Doctors spoke in hushed tones about smoke inhalation, minor burns, shock. Social workers came, their expressions professionally kind but distant. They asked gentle questions about family. Ethan shook her head mutely. It had always been just the three of them. Her parents were her whole world, now reduced to ashes in a charred hotel ruin.
One afternoon, a different kind of visitor arrived. A tall, severe-looking man in an expensive, dark suit. He introduced himself as Mr. Tom, an attorney. He carried an air of chilly formality that made Ethan shrink back into her pillows.
“Miss Monts,” he began, his voice devoid of warmth. “I regret the circumstances of our meeting.
It meant nothing to her. She stared blankly.
“Susan Wright,” Mr. Tom clarified, adjusting his tie, “is your maternal grandmother.”
Ethan blinked. Grandmother? Her mother rarely spoke of her family, and when she did, it was with a sadness she never fully understood. Her mum Marie had mentioned a falling out, years ago, before Ethan was born. She’d said they were “no longer in contact.”
“My… grandmother?” She whispered, her voice raspy from smoke damage.
“Indeed,” Mr. Tom confirmed. “Mrs. Wright has been informed of the… tragedy. She has expressed her intention to assume guardianship.”
Ethans’s heart clenched. A stranger? A grandmother who disowned her own daughter? “But… I don’t know her,” she protested weakly.
“Be that as it may,” The attorney said, his tone brooking no argument, “Mrs. Wright is your sole surviving blood relative. Arrangements are being made. You will be discharged into her care as soon as the doctors permit.” He placed a business card on her bedside table. “Contact my office with any immediate needs. Good day, Miss Ethan”
He left as abruptly as he arrived, leaving behind the scent of expensive cologne and a chilling sense of dread that eclipsed even the lingering terror of the fire. Ethan stared at the closed door, then at the sterile white walls of her hospital room. The silence wasn't peaceful anymore; it was the silence of abandonment, the terrifying quiet after the world has ended. She was alone, truly alone, heading towards a future as cold and unknown as the ashes of her past.