Chapter 1: The beginning
Olivia Pov:
Do you feel like you wake up to the same thing every day?
My name is Olivia. My father was diagnosed with multiple myeloma… Every day, I wake up I see my mother struggling trying to save my father every day but he gets worse every day. I just finished turning eighteen years old, to celebrate with me and my little sister, whose name is Chelsie but nickname cheli. We decided to go to Santa Monica, California to walk around the pier. When we were in line to purchase a funnel cake, behind me there was a tall white guy, his hair was so perfectly silky, he had the most beautiful green eyes I had ever seen. He was wearing a collar shirt that was unbuttoned, his shirt was so tight that I could see his abs through it. I was so nervous, I forgot what I was going to order.
Cheli: “OLIVIA!!! HELLO? Earth Olivia”
Olivia: “What”
Cheli: “ what do we get”
Olivia “OMG, umm just get a funnel cake with strawberries on top.”
When I looked back, he was smiling so hard because he knew I was nervous because of his presence. He out of nowhere pushed me and cheli out the way to pay for our funnel cake. I was so shocked. I just said “Thank you”. Who is he? Why did he pay for our funnel cake? ESPECIALLY why in front of his friends…
He said “Your welcome. By the way my name is Erick Carillo name to meet you.”
All of a sudden, you can hear his friends saying “that's my boy.”
My face flustered with redness, I was so nervous that I said “Thank you,” again. I grab Cheli to go to the other side to wait until my order is ready at the pick-up sign. As I stopped, I noticed he was following me.
Erik says “Can I get your number?”
I said “yes.”
He handed me his phone, when our hands connected to each other it felt like my body flamed up with sparks everywhere. As I’m typing my number, I look up to his dreamy green eyes.
I say“ My name is Olivia btw.”
That night I couldn’t sleep at all because I never felt like this with anyone, I had a few here, and then guys I have talked to , but this guy was all I dreamed of. Could it be possible God was on my side? Little did I know…
The next morning, when I woke up, I felt overwhelmed knowing I had to look for a job to help support my family. My brother, Andrew, was always being in trouble with the police. My mother was always arguing with him every day. It felt like every day is the same thing repeating itself . As I was walking around Hawthorne looking for help and wanted sign, I got a message from Erik. My heart flustered, I was so scared to open it, but I opened it so fast.
Erik: Hey, Olivia.
Olivia: Hi, Erik. How are you?
Erik: I’m good, and yourself? I was wondering if you wanted to hang out today?
Olivia: I’m great. And yes, of course, I'd love too,"
Erik: Great :) Send me your address. I’ll pick you up at 9
Olivia: Okay, I’ll see you then.”
When I look at the time, it is 4:30pm, I gave up and decided to go home to get ready. When I got home, I saw my mother arguing with Andrew about where he was all night.
I walked past them, and went to my room. I start showering by checking the time. It is 6:30, which is still early. I start by doing my makeup very simply. I put a little bit of concealer, blush, and mascara. Then I start by straightening my hair, and on the tips of my hair I do a little bit of curls. I decided to go with a white floral dress that is filled with tiny pink flowers. The dress was revealing my bust a lot, but it looked good on me. Before the time hit 9’ o clock, I go to the living room to check if everyone had fallen asleep. As I check I found the TV on, but no one was on the couch. I headed back into my room, got my keys, and purse. In the middle of my bed I put all my pillows, making it seem like I am sleeping. I headed towards the main front door, opening it slowly. I decided to wait outside to avoid anyone seeing me leaving or hearing me.
As I was waiting outside, I saw a brand-new BMW, all black. I see Erik parked in the middle of the street. He gets down to open my door.
He says “You look so beautiful.”
I said “Thank you.”
As I sit inside his car, it reeks of the smell of cologne. I don’t know what it was, but it smelled amazing.
He looks at me with the most astonishing look ever, like as if he is undressing me with his eyes. I get nervous, and my cheeks are flushed with redness. We start to talk in the car while he is driving.
Olivia: “So, where are we going?”
Erik: “We’re going to a café shop near Santa Monica”
Olivia: “Ahh okay”
Erik: “Tell me something about yourself” with a smirk on his face gazing at me.
Olivia: Well, I just turned 18 years old about two months ago. I was born in August, so I’m a virgo, I have 1 sister who is 16 years old. And a bigger brother who is 22 years old. What about you?
Erik: “I lived in New Jersey until I was 8 years old, until my parents decided to move to Miami. As of right now, we are staying in Los Angeles for 1 month and a half, or maybe more. I have about three brothers, no sisters.”
Olivia: “Wow, you moved a lot of places, that's pretty interesting.”
Erik: “We have arrived at the café shop. Wait here, I’ll open your door.”
Olivia: “Thank you.”
He opens my door, and I proceed to get down. As I get out of the car, I feel like the more prettiest woman ever. He acts like a complete gentleman. He proceeded to hold my hand, when I say I wanted to scream. I was going to explode. The erosion in my body was on fire. I felt as if I was in some kind of movie. He made me feel so special, like I’m the prettiest girl alive. I wanted to kiss him so badly…
As we walked into the café, it was so cute. The lights were dimmed, everyone looked so happy talking to each other. As we sit down, the waiter hands us the menu, he looks at me with the sweetest smile.
The whole time at dinner we laughed and talked like if we knew each other in another life. As we finished dinner I notice it was almost midnight. We head back into the car, and he proceeds to take me to the beach. We park in the parking lot, and he turns to look at me.
You can tell his eyes are piercing through me, his glare feels as if he's undressing me completely. He leans forwards and starts to kiss me very slowly. I can feel our lips are both moist. Then he wiggles his tongue inside my mouth, and pushes me more forward to him. As he kisses me I can feel his hand touching my thighs going up so slowly. At this point, I feel like I’m a waterfall. I want him so badly inside me….
He told me to jump to the back seat, so I proceeded to go to the back. He gets out of the car, opens the door from the back and enters. We both start kissing roughly, he picks me up and makes me sit on top of him. As we are kissing roughly, he proceeds to undress me. My dress falls onto the ground, he starts kissing me from my neck, moving slowly down to my breast. He removes my bra, he cups one of my breasts, he starts sucking it. I start moaning from the intense sucking he's doing, as I’m standing naked in front of him. He takes off his shirt, revealing his muscles. Looking at his body makes me wetter.
As I stand there looking at him, he pulls me closer, kissing me. While we were making out, he started to slowly take off his pants. He moves me back and forth to feel the erection through his underwear. I slowly start to moan, then he kisses me next again.
He aggressively lifts me up, rips off my underwear, my n*****s get so hard because of the aggressiveness. He puts his p***s inside of me, he starts to pace up so fast, leaving me without any breath. Every movement, every moan…
Erik: “Harder babyy?”
Olivia: “YES! HARDER, MORE”
He turns me around really fast, he pushes me down to the floor at a certain angle like a dog. He slaps my ass so hard. He says “you’re so sexy”
He pulls my hair to get a grip of me, he begins to push me back and forth, as each second passes by he gets more aggressive. I’m bouncing back and forth on the bed, you can feel the bed noises getting louder by the aggression that intensifies. At this point I can feel as if I’m coming, then I can feel a waterfall between my legs. We sit on the opposite side of each other inside the car. We both look at each other and smile. He moves closer to me, and kisses my forehead.
Erik says “It’s getting late babygirl, we should probably get you home.”
Olivia says “mm okay.”
He proceeds to hand me my clothes, then he gets his while I am changing. As he’s changing I can’t help to notice how handsome he is without clothes. Especially how big his d**k is, it nakes me crave for another round.
When we both out done changing, he proceeds to get out the car to open the other side of the car and open the passenger seat in the front. I get in, then I notice him get on the other side.
As he gets in, he starts to play his music, the whole ride was silent…
As we arrive at my house, he gets down to open my door, I get off. We both stare at each other
I turn to look at him, he grabs my chin and kisses me.
He says “Bye babygirl.”
Olivia: “Bye… Drive safe.”