Ex Criminal Gave Me Hope

Hello Everyone! So there's this oneshot or a short story I wanted to share. I created this a long time ago and I got 2 versions of it. The first version that I made makes me feel strange for some reason so I decided to rewrite it and make it sort of wholesome. So the first story I'm going to upload is the rewritten one and matches the title and description I made for this book... Hope you all will like it and leave your thoughts at the comment section. :)) The second story is my first version that I find strange. I wonder what you all prefer xD P.S both stories have the same name of the girl but has different name of the guy but they are just referring to the same guy who is a criminal or ex criminal Anyways, I just got back from my coffin break and there's a lot of stories I have in my mind that I wanna write down but I still have some unfinished stories that I've been planning to finish and create a wonderful story line. I'm not sure when I can update soon because classes will start and I'll be busier than ever... Hopefully all of you will still continue to support me even if I'm an unknown author and just a random writer passing by lol. But do read comments and it makes me happy seeing you all enjoy the stories I've made... (It was in Tagalog tho). Oh yeah, if I have time, I've been planning for a long time trying to make other genres of stories. I think I'll make them just short because I might not be able to finish them again xD But anyway, Thank you all <3