The holy vampire and the witch

Hi this is my first ever book. So please be nice. I’d really love to have feedback but with a nice tone. No bullying. My name is Kylie I am 21 years old I’m doing this as a hobby and maybe whoever’s reading will enjoy. If you are an author yourself please give me advice I like a little criticism! I have two children both are boys so please try to understand I’m a busy momma. And I’m still in recovery as I just gave birth in October!!! I hope yaw like what I write. Since this is my first book I’d like for you guys to give me feedback on the plots and the characters and whatever else maybe you can even give me ideas. That’s another thing if I’m stuck I might ask yaw for help on what yaw might like to read. This book is about a woman named Alasiah who lives in a kingdom with her majesty Rodrick, who is Also one of her very best friends. He’s having trouble with some of the neighboring kingdoms and people dying mysteriously. Rodrick asks Alasiah to go and seek out the help of Rodrick’s friends Antono and Naydia. But on her way to there home deep in the mountains she finds herself interrupted by an amazingly handsome man lekkas. Lekkas looks directly in her eyes and falls in love instantly. Will he let her in his heart like his past love or will he push her away afraid to get hurt again?