Two Mates, One Luna

Figured I should put this first. I don't have to go into details unless the character explains what they look like to them. This is the first book I have ever written in my life. I loved reading everyone's. So I figure I should give it a try. If you find things spelled wrong or don't make since to you please comment and let me know i really would love the feed back even if it not nice. Josephine(Joe)- 17 Bright Red eyes White long to her waist Thin waist well built Tattoo on right arm from wrist to elbow, full tattoo on left arm  5'6   Second In Command Luke-18 Dirty Blonde Blue eyes Well Built Matching the tattoo on his right arm is Josephine. Full tattoo on left arm going on to his chest 6'2   Third In Command Raven-17 Black hair Bright Blue Eyes It is very well built and it looks like a tree. The tattoo on his right arm is the same as Josephine's. Full left arm goes onto his chest and goes on his back. 6'0 Alpha Dylan - 18 6'2 Black hair Brown eyes Crescent moon tattoo on right shoulder   Alpha Dexter -18 6'2 Black Hair Brown Eyes Crescent Moon tattoo on left shoulder   Beta Jax - 18 6'0 Blonde hair Blue eyes     Gamma Andrew -18 6'0 Top warrior Black hair Black eyes Tattoos all over his body