The Girl Nobody Wanted
Quiet scared the people of Aro Hills worse than shouting ever did.
Smoke twisted upward at dusk, rising from cooking flames as if pulled by the coming night. From nearby kitchens it came, drifting above rooftops where shadows already pooled. By the cracked stone of the well, women stood close, words slipping out in hushed tones that barely carried past their feet. Laughter darted after them — small bodies racing down paths coated in dry earth and gravel. Faint but steady, a radio hummed far off, its tune bright even when bursts of noise split the rhythm.
Life seemed to pulse through every part of the village.
Until Amara appeared.
After that, the room grew quiet again.
Conversations paused halfway.
Her every move was watched. People looked without blinking. She walked on, unaware of the stares fixed behind her.
Judging.
Watching.
Waiting.
Down went Amara’s gaze, stepping along the thin path with a hollow metal pail in hand. The worn soles of her slippers whispered over cracked soil, just as hushed voices trailed off behind, light as unseen threads.
“That girl gives me bad dreams.”
“My cousin greeted her once and got sick the next morning.”
“They said her father disappeared because of her.”
“She carries darkness.”
Fingers clenching hard, Amara held the bucket tighter.
Don’t react.
Out of everything, that stuck right away when her mom passed. She held on to it before anything else could slip in.
Never react.
Once folks saw suffering, they thrived by feeding off it.
A sudden movement caught Amara's eye when an older woman yanked a little boy toward her by the roadside eatery. The scene unfolded fast, quiet, tense - no warning at all.
Curious eyes fixed on the thing. Quiet wonder filled their small face.
“Mama,” he whispered innocently, “is she really cursed?”
Softly now, the woman let her words fade into a whisper.
“Don’t look at her too long.”
Her throat tightened. On she moved.
Just past the village, behind towering trees, flowed the stream - human sounds fading there. Peace lived in that spot alone for Amara.
Out by the lake, she crouched low where ripples touched the shore. Her face in the shimmering surface seemed worn down.
Sixteen felt heavier than sleep could fix.
Beneath her eyes, shadows hung like tired thoughts. Loose strands slipped from her braids after hours bent over work. Near one eyebrow, a thin line stayed behind - Mama Eunice had been angry that day.
Water rose around the bucket as Amara lowered it.
Water moving nearby slowed her breath. She felt it in her chest, quiet and low.
For a moment…
silence.
No whispers.
No stares.
No fear.
A moment passed before words came from someone standing at her back.
“You should stop listening to them.”
A sudden jerk made her hands slip just then. The weight wobbled at her fingertips.
She turned sharply.
A small figure waited under the shade of a mango tree, standing some distance off.
Daniel.
Dark clothes covered him even though the sun burned high that day. His hands stayed hidden away, deep within fabric seams. Silence hung around him like a habit none dared break. Others stepped wide when passing, uneasy without knowing why. Whispers moved just behind his back, never catching up.
Years back, people whispered about his elder sibling vanishing.
Folks said strange minds showed up more than once among his kin.
Amara stood immediately.
“I wasn’t listening.”
Her face was what Daniel looked at, without speaking.
“You always pretend you’re not afraid.”
“I’m not.”
“That’s your problem.”
Amara frowned slightly.
“What does that mean?”
Close up now, Daniel moved near - she saw it then, a thin scar tracing his neck, something she’d missed before.
“Fear keeps people alive in this village.”
Her breath caught when those words came out of his mouth.
Her gaze darted elsewhere just before anyone could notice.
“I should go home.”
“Amara.”
A quietness in how he spoke caused her feet to still. The way sound dropped pulled her out of motion.
“If you hear whispers at night…”
He paused.
“…don’t answer them.”
A chill crept along her back, inch by icy inch.
“What whispers?”
Back he moved, vanishing among the trees before a word could be said.
Faster than a blink, he was gone without a trace.
Stillness pressed around Amara as she stood facing the bare trees. The woods offered no sound, no movement - only space where life should have been.
Coldness crept into the air without warning.
-
Darkness already filled the sky when she got back. The evening had slipped in while she was away.
Away from the center of town sat their home, just a modest structure weathering time. Cracks ran along its walls like old scars. The roof, stained brown by age, gave way when storms passed overhead.
Hardly had Amara crossed the threshold when Mama Eunice showed up.
“Where have you been?” her aunt snapped.
“At the stream.”
“You think food cooks itself?”
Down went the bucket, soft, like a secret. Amara moved without sound, careful in her pause.
Waiting around always made her restless. Slow things bothered her more than most could understand.
Questions bothered her worse than before.
Years after Amara's mother passed, it was Mama Eunice who stepped in - holding care in one hand, rules in the other. A quiet presence that shaped days without asking.
From the doorstep on, her holiness began. Inside, it was different.
Inside…
Something shifted in her, then she was no longer who she had been.
Softly, Amara spoke: "I'm truly sorry." She looked down as the words left her mouth.
Close by came Mama Eunice.
Too close.
“You enjoy embarrassing me in this community?”
“No, Aunty.”
“Then why do people keep talking about you?”
Her gaze dropped without a word.
Wrong choice.
A sharp sound cracked through the air without warning.
A sharp burst lit up her face. The sting spread fast through her skin.
“You bring shame into this house,” Mama Eunice hissed.
Her tongue found the sharp edge of a tooth, copper filling her mouth. She kept quiet.
Just like others picked up how to stay alive, she figured out when not to speak.
Repeatedly.
Painfully.
Out there near the stove, Mama Eunice lifted her finger.
“Finish cooking before your uncle returns.”
She gave a small nod before stepping back.
Yet while she stirred the pot, a single idea refused to loosen its grip.
Should those nighttime murmurs brush your ears…
don’t answer them.
-
Midnight brought the first drops. Wetness crept through the air soon after.
Heavy rain.
Darkness stirred, filled by a hush so deep it seemed to breathe. Quiet took shape, not empty but thick, like something listening.
Darkness pressed close as Amara stayed still on the narrow bed, ears tuned to each plink of water landing in the dented basin under the torn ceiling.
Tick.
Tick.
Tick.
A sudden flicker of light cut across the walls.
A rumble shook the air above the houses soon after.
Amara turned slowly beneath her blanket.
Something felt wrong.
Then she heard it.
Tap.
Wide awake, her eyes snapped open.
Silence.
Maybe the rain.
Her eyelids dropped shut one more time.
Tap.
Tap.
Her back snapped straight without warning.
The sound was coming from her window.
Her breathing slowed.
A sudden streak of light cut through the dark, just for a second.
Tap.
Tap.
Tap.
Someone was outside.
A cold grip pressed inside her ribs.
Was that you, Mama Eunice? her voice barely more than a breath.
No answer.
Only rain.
Then -
a voice.
Soft.
Cold.
Close.
“Amara…”
Her breath caught midair. Stillness locked each limb without warning.
A whisper curled through the air, close to what a person might sound like.
Almost.
“Amara…”
Tears stung at the back of her eyes.
The blanket twisted hard in her hands as fear pulsed through her ribs. A sharp thud echoed inside her body each time her heart struck bone.
A voice crept back through the silence. It had been gone a long time.
“They know what happened to your father.”
Bursts of lightning tore through the clouds without warning.
Amara gasped.
Her father.
Nobody mentioned his name. Not a soul brought him up.
Not anymore.
One November morning, he simply wasn’t there anymore - no note, no trace, nothing. Eleven years have passed since that silence began.
He might have just left one day. People thought maybe he chose to disappear.
Some said dark forces carried him away when the Harmattan winds blew.
But deep inside…
Something darker sat beneath her thoughts. Amara held on to that feeling like a stone in her pocket.
A sound reached ears again - last of its kind. It spoke, though not in words everyone knows.
“Look outside.”
After that, silence dropped like a stone into the room.
Seconds passed before Amara moved a muscle.
Then slowly…