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The haggle

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The story is about a girl who lost her job of being a doctor after falling in love with her male bestie and constantly having many scandals

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the haggle
Under the tree I'm listening to music I'm watching the sun set on one of the best views in Durban. I received a call from my male bestie saying he wants to see me wonder why cause I was with him all day . I took my bag and called an Uber to come fetch me since I'm an intern at Durban hospital. Hi I'm Luthando motloung born in a small town called eSbongile KwaZulu Natal South Africa. I left my home when I was 17 years after matric because my father remarried another wife and this one used to abuse me I couldn't tolerate it anymore. My mother left us for another man who went to live in USA with her, dad told me she left a note I still have it to this very day. I am the first born in my family and there are six other kids following me but we don't share the same mother. I am a dark skinned girl with Afro hair I put on blue or sometimes green eye contact. I am short and thick, I have a tiny voice. As I was saying I took an Uber and went to the location he sent me. I arrived it was 19:00 as I arrived I saw his car and went there. He saw him since he his tall. He was leaning next to his car looking at the beach it's very chilly outside and I forgot my coat. You see it's Durban, winter here is like autumn. I look at him he looks very handsome today. How come I didn't notice. With his light skinned and brown eyes Gosh this guy has been my crush ever since University. He also got a new hair cut maybe he wanted to show me that he can be so dramatic. Ohh his name is Sandile Sikhumbuzo Me: Sandile you called. (he turns back and looks at me) Sandile: Luu!( ohh gosh I love it when he calls me that) Me: why did you call me! Sandile: You look cute tonight. Me: Sandile nkosiyami (my god) Sandile: Okay I wanted to show you my new cut.(I told you he wants me to see his hair cut) Me: You have got to been kidding me . Sandile: I'm joking. There is something I wanted us to talk about it's very important. Me: Okay can we get in the car I'm cold. Sandile: How about we go eat somewhere? Me: Pay day today? Sandile: Yes! Me:Okay let's go to Macdonald. Sandile: You like that cheap place don't you. Me: No Sandile it's not cheap. (this guy is unbelievable macdonald is everyone's favorite but hey we don't all like the same thing) Sandile: Okay but I'm not going there I don't wanna lose my reputation. Me: Okay let's go to a restaurant. Sandile: At least that's better than MacD. He opened the door for me and we left to one of fanciest restaurant and as we got there I felt a bit ashamed cause people were wearing formal clothing and others expensive clothing and I was just wearing my mini dress with my Nike sneakers and socks. Sandile pulled a chair for me and we sat as a waiter came and gave us the menu and we had to order. Food in here looked so expensive and I have Never tasted anything yet. Me: Sandile what are you ordering? Sandile: I'm still looking why? Me: I want to order what you order. (he laughed at me and said) Sandile: If you are worried about the cost relax I got you.( I was like whaaat. This guy has he seen the prices fries cost R500) Me: Okay I'll see. Sandile: just a reminder the less the price the little the food. Me: I know that. Sandile: Stop worrying. I can see you looked worried.(this guy knows me so well.) Me: Yessir. Sandile: Wish you can say that in ... . (I didn't hear him) Me : What was that? Sandile: Ohh nothin' . Me: ohh okay. The Waiter arrived and he took our orders and left so I asked him Me: So what did you want us to talk about. Sandile: Luu there is something I wanted to tell you ever since we started being friends Me: Sandile you are scaring me what's that? Sandile: Luthando ever since I saw you that day with your friend walking towards me I suddenly fell in love with you ( and with that I dropped my phone as I was putting on my bag) Me: s**t my phone! Sandile: Is it broken? Me: it's cracked ohh gosh I don't have money to fix it. Sandile: I'll fix for you Luu. Me: No I can't accept that I dropped it. Sandile: It's my fault. Me: it's fine Sandile keep talking I just got shocked. Sandile: No it's fine I don't see the point. Me: What you were just going to tell me that important thing. Sandile: It's not important anymore. Here take this for the bill and for the Uber I forgot I gotta do something. ( He stood up and walked away) Me: Sandile!! Sandile!! Sandile!! (he just kept walking more faster as I said his name.) What's wrong with Sandile. The Waiter came and gave me the food and I requested for a takeaway and the bill. I can't sit here and eat alone. Plus I was already ashamed from the first place. The Waiter came I paid and took the food and I waited outside for my Uber . As a tall dark skinned guy approach me. He dropped his pen but didn't saw I took it and went to give it to him. Me: Hey sir you dropped your pen. (He looked at me like I had something on my face) Me: What?! The guy: Thanks for my pen. Me: You are welcome.But why are you looking at me like that The guy: No Reason. You just looked cute.(I blushed as i also looked at him who was also handsome. wait when did I start liking dark skinned guys I like the light I'm not racist though) Me: Thanks The guy: What's your name? Me: Luthando The guy : Luthando I love your name. What are you doing here so late it's dangerous for someone so adorable like you.(I blushed again. No actually this time I got butterflies) Me: I'm waiting for the Uber. The guy: I'm not trusting people with you. lemme drive you home cutie.( I am cold so why won't I ride with him he seems trustable) Me: Okay. He pointed out his to his car and he opened his car just like Sandile does for ohh s**t I completely forgot about Sandile. Wait this guy is driving my dream car a Mercedes G63 Brabus Damm I'm literally smiling The guy : Why are you smiling? (ohh s**t I've been caught) Me: This is my dream car. The guy: Someday I'll let you drive it or even borrow you even. (He puts on doja Cat Agora Hills. Wait he also listens to doja Cat Damm) Me : You listen to doja Cat? The guy: No I just love this song. It's perfect to perform.(perform?? perform what? I'm not even going to ask.) Me : Ohh. The guy : You can change the song if you like. Me: okay.( I put on my best Song Right here by Brandy. I see him moving his head. score on me for me) The guy: Girl I love you already.(wait I don't know this guy's name I'll ask him later don't wanna ruin the mood) Me: That's my gem. The guy : Damm I'm flirted. Me: Thank you. The guy : my pleasure cutie. So tell me what were you doing in that restaurant it's very expensive not that I'm judging or anything Me: My friend took me there said he wanted to tell me something important. As he was talking I dropped my phone as I was shocked when he said he loves me. The guy: I'm listening. Me: I don't know what he thought he suddenly got jumpy and left me with money to buy an Uber and the bill The guy: I'm glad he left money but I'm sure he thought you don't feel the same way as you dropped your phone. Me: I never said that. The guy: As guys usually think funny you know. Me: But I don't get it I never said anything. The guy: Yes you didn't but as you dropped your phone during his speech said a lot to him. Me: I messed up but I was confused we have been friends ever since I got here The guy: We arrived at your place now. we will talk later can I get your number Me: 0*********. (s**t lemme ask him his name) me: I didn't get your name The guy: It's Nqobile. Me: Nice nice The guy: Thank you Thando. I must get going we will see each other Me: Bye I want to my apartment it was 23:32 wow time flies you know. And I'm so hunger ohh s**t I forgot to give him his jacket its kinda cold outside. I took a bath while eating and I took my phone and tried calling Sandile 6 times but nothing. I hope he is fine. I called my close friend buhle to check up on her Me: Bee. Buhle: Luu sup. Me: my friend Buhle:spill the beans Me: Mind coming here I got food. Buhle: I got drinks Me: woza phela ( just come) Buhle: I'm on my way open the door . Me: It's not locked. Buhle has been my friend ever since I got here we studied together and gotten through s**t together I can't say she is my best friend but yeah she is my close friend because I can tell her anything. She lives upstairs my apartment. I hear the door it must here. I got out of the bathtub and took a towel and went to her. Buhle: Bathing at this time got f**ked. Me: Disgusting buhle I haven't gotten f**ked Buhle: I heard you were at a expensive restaurant with Sandile Me: Who told you that? Buhle: Rumors. Me: You and your rumors and yes we were at the restaurant. Buhle: why'd you come so late. Did you guys do a quickie. Me: Bee no. Buhle: then what tell me. Me: So Sandile confessed that he loves me and just when he was saying that I dropped my phone I was shocked Bee. Buhle: What?!!! You lying! Me: serious so after I dropped my phone he got jumpy like I said something wrong he got all sweaty and gave me money and left Buhle: The whole Sandile? Can't be. Me: I'm dead serious. After that I paid the bill and Left as I was waiting for my Uber some guy dropped his pen Buhle: Lemme guess you picked it up and gave it to him and found your prince charming?( Buhle is not okay I tell you that) Me: The F no well he his handsome just that he is dark skinned and he has a G63 Buhle: Wait, So it was you on that G63? Me: Yes. why are you spying on me. Buhle: I forgot to close my window Me : Likely story. Yeah his name is Nqobile. Buhle: Surely he is rich Me: Yeah he is Buhle: Date him chommie stop your racism. (friend) Me: I will chommie. Buhle: Good friend we are going to eat Money ( I looked at her with that look) Me: Seriously buhle. I don't even know this guy Buhle: I'm kidding. Me: He said he will call Me Buhle: When cause it's late. Me: I don't know. ( just then my phone rings) Buhle: Who is it , the new guy Nqobile? Me: I don't know (I answer it) Me: Hi Caller: Hey cutie pie.( this is Nqobile) Me: Hey Nqobile Nqobile: You didn't know it's me? Me : No I thought it's work related. Nqobile: Where do you work? Me: Durban hospital. Nqobile: What are doing there? Me: I'm an intern. Nqobile: Okay. Doctor who? Me: Doctor motloung. Nqobile: Ohh okay short stuff.(I literally got butterflies) Me: Short stuff? Nqobile: Never mind my African Barbie. What are you doing tomorrow cutie. (did he just say I'm an African Barbie gosh I'm flirted.) Me: Tomorrow I'm doing nothing. Nqobile: Okay Doctor I'd like to take you out. Me: Where are we going sir.(come on I'm trying to flirt back) Nqobile: Maybe that restaurant or some where else Me: I don't mind going to that restaurant again. (plus this time I might wear formal) Nqobile: Okay I'll pick you up at 5 pm sharp. Me: Okay no problem. Nqobile: Okay short stuff. I think we should call it a night you see. Me: Yeah I think so two Nqobile: Good night my African Barbie. Me: Good night sweetie. (I had him giggle but I hanged up quickly I just wanna scream) Buhle: Okayyyy! Okay short stuff. Me: Dammm this guy. Buhle: You are not going back to that restaurant looking like that. Me: How do I look? Buhle: You Don't look eye grabbing. tomorrow we are going shopping and I'm getting you a frontal. Me: What a frontal? Buhle: Yes and nails it's on me. Me: As long as I'm spending no cent. Buhle: You are my close friend you have to like me. (She was right though buhle is so pretty compared to me) Me: Ohh okay let's see please I had a long day. Buhle: And Sandile?? Me: He isn't answering my calls. Buhle: lets us a private number Me: Why didn't I think of that. (so yeah we called Sandile. And he actually picked up) Sandile: Hello private number ( He sounds drunk ) Me: Sandile it's Luu. Sandile: Gosh why are calling me. Me: What The F Sandile You left me in the restaurant. Sandile: It's not like I did that on purpose or anything. Anyways I'm driving you are disturbing me I might get a car accident. I'm already drunk enough.(He hanged up. I looked at Buhle) Buhle: Leave Sandile Alone for a while he is just being childish. Me: I'm so worried. Buhle: Were you going to date him. Me: Honestly friend I don't know Sandile is my friend. Buhle: Sandile was your crush and look at him late as F. Me: You can say that again. Buhle: Anyways lets sleep darling tomorrow is your big day. Me: You talking as if I'm getting married or something. Buhle: What if he propose? Me: Haa haa buhle uyaphapha yazi.( You are forward you know) Buhle: Mnx. Me: Goodnight sweetie you will find me in bed. Buhle: Wait for me. We went to bed and slept we woke up by a knock on the door I went to check it out since it's my apartment after all. I opened the door to Some guy from Mr D food. Me: Wait I didn't order anything you sure you got the address. The guy: Mr Nkosi said I should give you this.( Mr Nkosi who the F is Mr Nkosi) Me: okay thank you. The guy: Sign here please. Me: Okay thanks. Have a good day. The guy: Bye my lady. (I closed the door and as I'm checking the food my phone rings it's unknown number) Caller: You got the food.(It's Nqobile) Me: You are Mr Nkosi? Nqobile: Ohh yes darling I'm Mr Nkosi. Me: Thank you for the food but I Never asked for this. Nqobile: Can't I spoil my African Barbie. Me: Ohh . Nqobile: Anyways I have to go sweetie we will talk. Me: You still picking me up for the date. Nqobile: Yes cutie. Me: Okay bye Mr Nkosi. Nqobile: Bye Doctor Motloung.(I hanged and called buhle) Buhle: What the F why did you order so much food. Me: Wasn't me. Buhle: Who Sandile? Me: No Nqobile. Buhle:This is Lovin you. Me: I'm checking feelings. Buhle: Don't friend it's too fast. Me: I can't help it. Buhle: Well try to help it let's try to finish this. Me: Okay. Let's finish fast we still gotta go to the mall. Buhle: Ohh yeah someone has a date.( We tried to finish the food but hey we Ani't boys so I put some to eat later. Buhle went to her apartment to take a bath so we can go and I did the same. After that sat on my couch waiting for buhle who was taking forever. Some one knocked I was to lazy to go open I shouted to the person to come in surprising it's Sandile) Me: Ohh. Sandile: Hey Luthando. Me: Sure Sandile. Sandile: how are you? Me: I'm drunk and you.(obvious I'm kidding I'm just mad at this guy) Sandile: Luu I'm sorry. Me: Sorry?? Sorry?? Sorry for what? That you left me in the restaurant. Or that you called me tired as F to come and get cold at restaurant. Sandile: calm down. Me: excuse me. Sandile you left me without you even saying anything (my life saver entered the door) Buhle: Friend let's go I'm done. Ohh hey Sandile. Me: Yeah let's go. Buhle: I'm not disturbing? Me: No he was on his way out.( I took out my keys and we all went out I locked the door and Sandile went up stairs I'm sure he is going to see his bro's) Buhle: What's that all about? Me: I don't care. let's go We went to the mall honestly buying with buhle is like shopping with my mom cause wow. After many shops we entered we finally found a dress for me and heels. We went to the salon to do my hair I wanted braids but Buhle suggest for a frontal I had no problem it's not my money.

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