Burning Desire (mafia story )

ok before you guys get hella confused let me tell you about the names , in this prologue I'm using the names Maryam and Alexander , bcz i like those names and they were the main leads but due to the continues pressure of my bestie I've changed the names of the main leads to Aykiz and Zaviyar . i didn't edit the book yet so if you see the name Maryam or Alexander any where then please don't get confused  .  similarly I've changed the names Arnab and Zain to Ayzel and Ethan . She was crying and crying because of her father,s death on the other side Alexander was very happy to see the daughter of his biggest enemy cry Then with the tugh on the door he enter in her room. She was shocked to see him there never in her life she have imagined that the person who just killed her father would be standing in front of her with all his glory and pride Kutta..!!! Is ki itni himat ka ye mara gar ma bhi gus aya (Dog...!!! He was so brave that he broke into my house ) That was the first thought that came in Maryam,s mind. but she was too scared to react at that time. He took a step toward her and she stayed still . And  he got more closer to her . He wipe the  tears from her face and she  flinched at his touch. A smirk from on his lips after seeing her reaction. She backed away a little. And his smirk only  grew wider "Ohh come on baby i don't like to see my wify cry before her wedding "he said "W..w..wify"she asked his in utterly confused "Yes you heard it right my wife......or should I say my soon to be wife "he said witn a bit amusement in his voice "I'm not your wife and never will be. How dare you think that I will marry you after what you did" she shout at him "Stop shouting...you will and you are going to marry me and that's final" he said in a calm tone How the hell is he so calm after killing my father destroying my life he is siting in front of me all calm how??? She thought "I will n..not marry you not now not e..ever"she said plainly "Darling I'm not asking you I'm telling you that we will  and we are marrying  tomarrow" he said a bit irrated "What if I don't agree to this " "Then I'll f**k you right hear right now" he said in a threatening voice "the choise is all yours" Yahhhhhhhhh I did it this is my first attempt of writing a book ...so what do you think  guys ??? Do you like it ??? Feel free to point out the mistakes OK that's it for now