( When I gave her back to God)
(Daniel’s POV)
I never believed in destiny — not until the night I met her.
It was raining hard, the kind that soaks you to the bone. I saw her standing under a flickering streetlight, clutching her bag, laughing softly at the storm. I don’t know what came over me, but I walked toward her and offered my umbrella. She looked up at me and smiled — and just like that, everything in me fell silent.
Her name was Elise.
Days turned into months, and somehow, she became my home. I memorized the way she laughed, the way her eyes turned into tiny crescents when she was happy. She was the kind of peace I didn’t know I was searching for.
But peace never lasts long, does it?
It started with her getting tired too easily, her lips turning pale. I told her to rest, but she brushed it off with her usual smile. Until one night, she fainted in my arms. I remember screaming her name, begging her to open her eyes.
The hospital smelled like fear and prayers. The doctor said her heart was failing. I felt the world collapse beneath my feet. I wanted to trade places with her. I wanted God to hear me — even just once.
I stayed by her side, holding her hand, whispering promises I wasn’t sure I could keep.
“You’ll get better, love. I swear. You have to.”
But deep down, I was terrified.
That night, I went to the chapel inside the hospital. It was empty, just me and the cross. I knelt, my hands shaking, my heart breaking.
“Please,” I begged, “Take everything from me. Just let her live. Let her breathe again.”
And then, something inside me broke — but in the quietest, most peaceful way.
The next morning, Elise woke up. The doctors called it a miracle. But I knew the truth — miracles always come with a price.
Before she could find me, I left.
I wrote her a letter, my last one.
My love, if you’re reading this, it means you survived — and that’s all I ever wanted. I made a promise to God last night. If He saved you, I would serve Him. I’m keeping that promise now. Please don’t hate me for leaving. Just live, Elise. Live the life I gave up for you.
I signed it,
Yours, always — Daniel.
It’s been 7 years now. I wear the white robes of a priest, not a lover. I spend my days praying, helping others, pretending my heart doesn’t ache every time I hear her name.
Today, she came to the church. I almost dropped my rosary when I saw her. She looked radiant — healthy, alive. The kind of alive I prayed for.
Our eyes met. Time froze.
She smiled through her tears and whispered, “You kept your promise.”
And all I could say, with a trembling heart, was,
“So did you.”
The choir began to sing. Bells echoed through the air.
And in that sacred silence, I realized —
some loves aren’t meant to last forever.
Some are meant to save a life, then let go.