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When fate said No to us

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A short story between a man who fell Inlove to a woman. But something tragic that happen that can cause something to their relationship.

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( When I gave her back to God)
(Daniel’s POV) I never believed in destiny — not until the night I met her. It was raining hard, the kind that soaks you to the bone. I saw her standing under a flickering streetlight, clutching her bag, laughing softly at the storm. I don’t know what came over me, but I walked toward her and offered my umbrella. She looked up at me and smiled — and just like that, everything in me fell silent. Her name was Elise. Days turned into months, and somehow, she became my home. I memorized the way she laughed, the way her eyes turned into tiny crescents when she was happy. She was the kind of peace I didn’t know I was searching for. But peace never lasts long, does it? It started with her getting tired too easily, her lips turning pale. I told her to rest, but she brushed it off with her usual smile. Until one night, she fainted in my arms. I remember screaming her name, begging her to open her eyes. The hospital smelled like fear and prayers. The doctor said her heart was failing. I felt the world collapse beneath my feet. I wanted to trade places with her. I wanted God to hear me — even just once. I stayed by her side, holding her hand, whispering promises I wasn’t sure I could keep. “You’ll get better, love. I swear. You have to.” But deep down, I was terrified. That night, I went to the chapel inside the hospital. It was empty, just me and the cross. I knelt, my hands shaking, my heart breaking. “Please,” I begged, “Take everything from me. Just let her live. Let her breathe again.” And then, something inside me broke — but in the quietest, most peaceful way. The next morning, Elise woke up. The doctors called it a miracle. But I knew the truth — miracles always come with a price. Before she could find me, I left. I wrote her a letter, my last one. My love, if you’re reading this, it means you survived — and that’s all I ever wanted. I made a promise to God last night. If He saved you, I would serve Him. I’m keeping that promise now. Please don’t hate me for leaving. Just live, Elise. Live the life I gave up for you. I signed it, Yours, always — Daniel. It’s been 7 years now. I wear the white robes of a priest, not a lover. I spend my days praying, helping others, pretending my heart doesn’t ache every time I hear her name. Today, she came to the church. I almost dropped my rosary when I saw her. She looked radiant — healthy, alive. The kind of alive I prayed for. Our eyes met. Time froze. She smiled through her tears and whispered, “You kept your promise.” And all I could say, with a trembling heart, was, “So did you.” The choir began to sing. Bells echoed through the air. And in that sacred silence, I realized — some loves aren’t meant to last forever. Some are meant to save a life, then let go.

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