Behind the mighty Wall

In front of everyone, Keaton was handsome, Kind, and Nice. Everyone respect him and follow his every lead, But behind the closed door Keaton was a heartless, arrogant and Brutal. 

No one knew about his other side until his childhood friend found out one night and the next night he kidnapped his childhood friend.

I'm very bad at sumary and my grammar.

like my friend use to say "Just write it even the grammar is wrong! they can still read it!!"