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It was my mistake ( Luisa × Asher )

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Hello, everyone. I'm new here and i hope you guys will support me. this is my first story and also i uploaded this story to wp. My WP account @pwrettis1607this is based on real life. Whatever happens in this story is actually according to my friend's cousin. Luisa is an ordinary girl, not that brilliant girl, girlie, dont have any fashion sense, introvert, ugly. While, Asher is a brilliant student who's roll is 02. wears glasses, caring, extrovert, ugly but not much ?. Asher is bestfriend of Luisa's friend Alisha. Luisa has been liking Asher for 8months but never proposed him. While, Asher loves Alisha. they were in a relationship but it was not good. They broke up after 25days. Suddenly, Something happened that ruins Luisa's life. Luisa thought about suicide but as its haram in Islam, She didnt tried. Alisha was a w***e girl ( or should i say She Is A w***e Girl) When Luisa was broken, Sofiya luisa's close friend helped her to stay strong and she was always witb luisa. BUT!! not only because of these luisa was broken but also for friendship. She had been in Friendship with trio gang Audity, fatema and israt for 2years. but because of some misunderstanding their friendship broke. As people says "some relationship breaks because of third person" but that person was fifth. In our friendship group, my name was "Mom of the group" , Audity "Drama queen", Israt "crazy b***h" & Fatema "innocent baby". i thought they were so cute and innocent.... untill, they showed their true colour infornt of everyone.

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Day - 1 & 2
Luisa's Pov : Hello, My name is Luisa. I'm a student. But a weak one. My mom admitted me to a coaching called "Smile student care". I have 2 coaching for now. In " Smile Student Care" coaching, i study physics. Today is my first day going there ?‍?. I'm so much nervous. I'm an introvert girl. I only talk with people who starts the conversation first. Or else I'm shy to even look at them. Coaching starts at 11am. Now, its 10am. My mom making breakfast. I got changed to a normal dress and brushed my hairs. I ate my breakfast and its 10:37am. We are now going there. At the lift, my hear was beating so fast. I was going to faint due to nervous. Somehow, i calmed myself. I greeted the new teachers. Physic teacher showed me the class room. There is 3 students. 2senior girls and one boy who is the brother of my bestfrnd. That boy and me study at the same class. Oh teacher CAME!!! He is askingg me questions!! What should i doooo????? Teacher : What is your name, girl? Luisa : *in a low voice* Luisa. Teacher : oh. Bring out your physic book. Luisa bring out her book and teacher starts to teaching her. After an hour - Teacher : your homework is whatever is have tought you today just review that, ok? Luisa : *low voice* okay sir. Teacher : class dismiss. *leaves* I was packing my bag but suddenly that boy spoke up :- Boy : did you recognised me? Its me Mahmud. Luisa : yes brother. How are you? Mahmud : I'm fine. Do you still talk with my sister? Luisa : yes brother. Mahmud : okay fine then. Bye Luisa : bye. With that saying, i left. Ugh it was so boring and shitty day. I just want to take a nap. At home : I came back home. My mom was cooking so i ddnt disturbed her. I went back to my room and laid on my bed. Its feel so warm. My mom is calling me ugh. Mom : luisa, how was it? Luisa : hm, good. He teaches so well. Mom : ok. You have another coaching at 5pm. Its English coaching. Luisa : wait, what??? I'm so tired. Mom : go and take a nap. Luisa : fine. I laid on my bed but my cat biting me. She wants her food. I gave her food. Then i felt asleep. My mom wake me up for lunch. I freshens up and I ate my lunch lazily. After that, i was scrolling my phone. I was scrolling **. My friends messaged me. I replied them. At 4pm: My mom was shouting at me for being lazy. So i went to my room and starts changing to my casual outfit. Its 4:30 now. We are going there now. At first, i brought new exercise book ( ledger). There is 5 students. All of them are girls. I'm now feeling finally a bit good because there is no boy. Its gonna be peaceful. I guess I'm wrong - English teacher was tasting me before starting the lessons. Teacher Informed my mom that I'm good but a little bit weak. Like I'm not confidence about my answers. After that, he was teaching us but others were talking with each other. Disturbing the class.teacher scolded them but still they were talking. While, i was silently listening. Some girls started talking to me and introduced themselfs. They were Tia, sunbhi, Rosie, Mexica. Other one didnt talk with me but was glaring me. I was lowkey feeling awkward but in my mind " that slut is glaring at me. She is glaring at me like she is gonna eat me alive. Stupid slut. She is making me questioning about her gender." After 1hour and 15 minutes later class ended. In my mind "finally" I greeted the teacher and went back to my home. At Home : I finally laid on my bed but my mom same and asked about english class. I told her that it was good. I was scrolling f******k. Untill, i realised that its 7:55 pm now. My mom gonna scold me. So, i hurriedly started reading. I note down coachings times. Physic : sun-Tue-thurs days. time : 11am. English : sat-mon-wed. Time : 12am. After studying, i ate my dinner. And its 11pm now. My mom told me to sleep but first i used phone for 20 minutes. Mom was scolding me so i slept. Next Day - At 7am : Luisa's Pov : I woke up so early for my boring College. After morning routine and eating i left for my College. Time skip to College : I'm feelings so goood~~ something gonna happen. I'm damn sure. Oh its Becky. I waved at her. She waved back. We talk halfway. We both have same class but she was going to her boyfriend. Becky : girl, I'm gonna Kill him. Luisa : kill who? Brother Brovat? Oh dont do it. Or else he gonna hunt everyone whom you talked with. Becky : yeah i guess so. Do you know i cant even talk with any female friends because of him. I may divorce him. Suddenly brovat, Becky's bf talked from behind - Brovat : You wish baby. ( to becky) sister luisa, do you know i have been waiting for you to come so that i can treat you a meal. Luisa : ow. I'm here now. But i was joking about meal. Becky : luisa, you got the chance to spend his money. My other friends didnt even got any money from him. He didnt even gave them 1tk. But he is ready to treat you. Luisa : I'm special ?*flips hair* Brovat : yes. Its because you helped me to pursue her. Even if i give you 100billion money, it wont be enough. So thank you is not enough so i will treat you once a month. Luisa : its okay, brother. You dont have to. *class bell rang* Becky : lets go inside. Time skip to break time : Becky : so how is you new coaching going? Luisa : absolutely boring. I hate it. Brovat : i knew it *laughing* Luisa : *whines* dont laugh. If you again laugh, i will never let you touch my becky baby. Backy : *smirking* yes baby. Brovat : *gulps* sorry my elder sister. Please forgive me. Luisa : hmm good *satisfied* After a while, bell again rang. Its mean break time is over. We all entered our class room Time skip to 11am: Its Tuesday. So i have physics class. I went there and same s**t going as usual. Same students. Same shits. But suddenly teacher asked if i could here at 12pm. I said i have English class but teacher said he will manage that. So i agree to come here at 12pm. Time skip at night : We ate our dinner and finished my study. My and my mom is playing ludo now. My mom won this time but again we played. Now i won. My mom lost. Its feels good when you wins. English teacher called my mom - English class : at 2pm. after talking, we played another round but this time, i LOST. aish, now i know how other feels when they loses the game. ugh. ugh. ugh..UGH. I dont wanna play anymore.

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