The Night The Sky Burned
The sun was setting over the Khagul Kingdom, casting a warm orange glow over the bustling streets.
Merchants were packing up their stalls. Children chased each other through the market square. The smell of roasted meat and jasmine drifted from the palace kitchens.
For a hundred years, Khagul had known peace.
On the high balcony of the palace, King Arin II, a just and fair ruler, stood with his advisors. His crown was simple, his armor unadorned. He believed a king should be close to his people.
At his side stood his son, Ether.
Nineteen. Broad-shouldered from training. Eyes too serious for his age. Ether had a strong sense of justice that sometimes got him in trouble with the court.
“Father,” Ether said, watching a group of guards train below. “The northern patrols haven’t reported in three days.”
The King smiled. “You worry too much. The Devil's Hinn have not crossed our border in a generation.”
“They covet our trade routes,” Ether said. “And our position. The rivers, the mountains...”
“We will send riders at dawn,” King Arin II said, placing a hand on Ether’s shoulder. “For now, enjoy the sunset with me. A kingdom is more than borders, son. It is people.”
Ether nodded, but he couldn’t shake the unease in his chest.
Meanwhile, in the dark and foreboding Devil's Hinn kingdom, a gathering of shadowy figures convened in secret.
The Devil's Hinn was a land of black stone and red sky. No crops grew there. No songs were sung. Only war.
In the heart of their obsidian citadel, the leaders stood around a table carved from a single bone. Maps of Khagul were spread across it.
At the head stood Malakai.
He was not tall like other warlords. He was lean, draped in black robes. His face was mostly hidden by a mask of bone. But his eyes blazed with ambition.
“The time has come to strike,” he declared. His voice was quiet, but it carried. “For too long we have watched Khagul grow fat on trade while we starve. For too long they have called us savages.”
A general slammed a fist on the table. “Then let us teach them what savages do.”
Malakai raised a hand. “We will take the Khagul Kingdom by force, and claim its wealth and power for ourselves. Their rivers will run with our banners. Their palace will be our throne.”
He lifted a hand, and dark mist curled from his fingers. “And their king will kneel.”
The leaders dispersed, moving to ready armies, spies, and sorcery. The war had been decided.
Back in Khagul, night fell.
The orange glow faded to purple, then to black. But the unease remained.
King Arin II, sensing the growing tension, called for a council with his top advisors in the war room.
“We have reason to believe that the Devil's Hinn are planning an attack,” Advisor Halen warned. He was an old man with ink-stained fingers. “Three caravans have vanished on the northern road. Our scouts found Devil's Hinn sigils burned into the trees.”
A murmur went through the room.
“We must prepare our defenses,” said Captain Thorne, a grizzled veteran who had served the King for 20 years. “Double the watch. Close the south gate.”
King Arin II nodded gravely. He looked tired. “We will not be caught off guard,” he promised. “But let us not jump to conclusions. We must gather more information before we act. I will not start a war on rumor.”
Ether stood behind his father, jaw tight. Too late, he thought. We’re already at war. We just don’t know it yet.
The council ended late. The King went to rest. The advisors went to send messages.
Ether stayed awake.
The palace was quiet. Too quiet.
Ether grew restless, sensing that something was amiss. The air felt heavy. Even the crickets had stopped.
“I need air,” he muttered to himself.
He slipped out of the palace through a servant’s door he’d used as a child. No guards. No torchlight. Just him and the city.
The streets were mostly empty. A few drunks. A few night watchmen.
In the shadows of the market, near the dry fountain, Ether encountered a mysterious figure.
The man was wrapped in a dark cloak. His face was hidden. He moved like he didn’t want to be seen.
“You’re the prince,” the figure said. Not a question.
Ether drew his dagger. “Who are you?”
The man didn’t flinch. “Someone who’s seen the torches on the northern ridge. Someone who’s heard the drums in the Devil's Hinn camps.”
He leaned in. “They’re coming. Tonight. Through the old smuggler’s tunnel under the south wall. You must warn your father. The kingdom is in grave danger.”
Ether’s blood went cold. “Why are you telling me this?”
“Because someone has to,” the man said. Then he was gone, melting into the alley.
Ether didn’t think. He ran.
He burst into the palace, skidding across the marble floor.
“Father! Guards! The Devil's Hinn are—”
The words died in his throat.
Because the horns were already sounding.
Not the alarm bells. The war horns. Low, terrible, and far too close.
The first explosion shook the palace walls.
“It’s too late,” Thorne said, appearing in the hallway with blood already on his sword. “They’re inside the walls. The south gate was betrayed.”
King Arin II was already moving. He threw on his armor, but not his crown. “To the walls!”
Ether grabbed a sword from the armory. It felt too heavy.
Outside, hell had arrived.
The Devil's Hinn army had already launched a surprise attack, catching the Khagul Kingdom's defenders off guard.
Torches lit the night. Black-armored soldiers with horned masks poured through the streets. They moved like they knew the city. Like they’d been waiting.
The battle raged on.
King Arin II fought bravely alongside his warriors in the palace courtyard. He was not a young man, but he moved with the precision of a lifetime of training. Men fell around him.
Ether fought too. He was scared. But he was angry.
He drove his sword into a Devil's Hinn soldier who was about to strike a child. He shouted orders he wasn’t qualified to give. He dragged a wounded guard behind a wall.
“Hold the line!” he screamed. “For Khagul!”
But the line was breaking.
Sorcery lit the sky. Malakai’s mages threw fire into the barracks. The great temple caught flame. Screams filled the air.
In the chaos, Ether saw his father.
King Arin II stood on the palace steps, surrounded by six Devil's Hinn elites. He was wounded, but he was not kneeling.
“Your kingdom is mine now, old man,” one of them taunted.
King Arin II smiled, bloody and tired. “Then come take it.”
They rushed him.
Ether tried to get to him. Thorne tried to get to him.
They were too late.
The King fell.
No speech. No last words. Just a man who had given everything for his people, falling on the steps of his own home.
“NO!” Ether’s voice cracked.
Two Devil's Hinn soldiers turned toward him.
Strong hands grabbed him from behind. Thorne.
“Not you too,” Thorne growled in his ear. “We have to go. NOW.”
“I’m not leaving him!”
“He’s gone, Ether! If you die here, Khagul dies with you!”
Thorne dragged him through secret passages. Behind them, the palace burned.
They emerged at a postern gate where two others waited: Lirien, the palace healer, and Aria, a scribe who had been copying royal records.
From the hill outside the city, they watched.
Khagul burned. The palace burned. And on the highest tower, a new banner was raised. A broken crown over a skull. The sigil of the Devil's Hinn.
No one spoke.
Finally, Ether did. His voice was raw.
“My father is dead.”
Thorne put a hand on his shoulder. “I’m sorry, lad.”
“I should have listened,” Ether whispered. “I should have told him sooner.”
Lirien shook her head. “You did what you could. Now the question is: what do we do next?”
Ether looked at the burning city. At the people in the river. At the banner.
The grief was there. But under it, something else. Something cold and hard.
“He took everything from us,” Ether said. “Our home. Our king. Our peace.”
He turned to the others. “He doesn’t get to keep it.”
Aria stepped forward. “What can five people do against an army?”
“We start with five,” Ether said. “Then ten. Then a hundred. We gather information. We find allies. We make them pay for every street, every house.”
Thorne studied him. Then he knelt.
“For King Arin,” he said. “And for you, Prince Ether. I’m with you.”
One by one, they nodded.
As they turned to leave, a twig snapped behind them.
Ether spun, sword up.
A man stood in the trees. Tall. Scarred. Gray eyes. No armor, no sigil.
“Relax, prince,” the man said. “Name’s *Ryker*. I’ve been watching Malakai for a long time. And if you want your kingdom back... you’re going to need help.”
In the distance, another horn blew. Not a warning. A celebration. Malakai was claiming the throne.
Ether looked at Ryker. Then at his small group. Then at the burning kingdom behind them.
“The war starts now,” Ether said.