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Evil Within

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Luna Bancroft was an ordinary girl living in a small town of Charlesrange. Strange and bizarre kidnappings and murders started to happened around her neighborhood and she suspected a new comer in the town. With the help of two private investigator, will Luna catch the killer?

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PROLOGUE
Outside, it was pouring. But inside an abandoned cabin in the middle of nowhere, there was a storm hurling inside a closed room. The rain poured harder on the windowpane, as it will break in anytime soon. The whirling sound of wind passing through the small outlet above the wall brings out the consciousness of the pale girl who was tied to the chair with ropes tightly. The room was chilly, and the floor was ice as a frozen lake. Lights were out and the storm outside did no good work bringing up some light in the dark cold room. That girl started to open her eyes slowly, trying to adjust her site. The pungent smell hit nausea, and she emptied her stomach. She bathed in her own bile and couldn't do anything to help herself as her hands were tied behind her back. The cold crept inside her bare body as she tried to untie herself, but her attempts were just a waste of time. "Ww.. what is this place? Where am I?" Girl started to panic as the realization hit her. "I was at the library and going home, and suddenly everything went black." The girl stayed confused. "Ohh.. looks like my new pet is awake." A tall dark figure standing near the door turns the light on. She shuts her eyes as the sudden exposure to the light burning her delicate blue orbs. As her eyes started to adjust with the light, she started to observe her surroundings, but without her glasses, everything was blurred. She started to tremble in fear but the body tied to the chair with thick ropes, only bruises her badly. The tall figure approached her and gently caressed her cheeks and tucked a few of her hair strands behind the ears. He kept his face behind a filter mask, but his coal dark eyes imitated danger only. "It will be fun, my dear.. I love to break girls like you, who are vulnerable to crush under palms." He started to laugh hysterically. The panic rose in her, and her heart pounded badly, her stomach flipping in pure terror. "What did I do to you? I have never done anything wrong with anyone, please let me go.." the girl cried. "Of course, you didn't do anything wrong, and that's why you are here. I abducted you for my personal kind of fun." He gives stress to the word fun. His voice sent shivers down to her body. "If you want money, my parents don't  have any money, I'm of no use. Please leave me.." he back slapped her with such force that her lips parted at the corner and blood oozes as a red lava. He gripped her hair forcefully, even derooted a few strands of hair. The girl started to cry loudly as the pain intensified. "Shut up, b***h. Just pleading like a mutt won't let you out from here and moreover your dead body will be going out from here." He grinned as he took out a lash whip. The horror took over her eyes. She started to shake in fear as he again approached her. He untied her rope and threw her on the cold cemented floor. Her muscles sour and she was not able to get up, she was exhausted. She tried crawling away from him, but he gripped her hair and dragged her to a corner. He kicked her in guts and started to whiplash her. Then she turned herself toward the corner and whipped lashed on her back. Her white, pale skin became bloodied and wounded. She cried loudly, but no one was listening to her except the psycho, to whom her screams were like a melody to his ears. He stopped whipping and went to take out another weapon for his fun.. She was sobbing hard as her back became numb after a tortured session.  He took out an axe and went to her side. She heard his footsteps and turned to him, but she gasped in horror to see an axe in his hand. She wanted to run away from this hell, so she dragged herself towards the door but found it locked only. She panicked and pleaded to him, "please leave me, let me go. I ll never say anything to anything, not even to the police. I don't want to die. He laughs madly, " I know that you are not going to say anything to the police because dead bodies don't talk." He again laughs devilishly. His eyes met with her and only lust can be seen. "Okay. You are free. You can go." The girl was shocked to hear those words. "Can I? Really?" He nodded his head and threw his axe on the floor. She gets up with the help of the cold wall. And tried to unlock the door. She unlocks it and tries to escape, but he grips her arm forcefully and pulls her back to the room. "Do you think I'm letting you go?" As he just spat those words out, he pulled out a butcher's knife and sliced it through her chest. She whimpered in pain, moreover she went into shock. The blood oozed out as a fountain. She collapsed on the floor. Her body fell limp, but her eyes were staring at the dark figure. He unzips his pants and pisses on her body, "what a waste of time." With an axe, he beheaded his head from the body and cut her entire body into small pieces. Packed them in a small black poly bag, he went to wash his hands on the basin. He removed his mask and washed his face. He stared his eyes in the mirror, only to see no remorse, no guilt, no nothing. He gazed away from the emotionless eyes and went out from the cabin with two black bags on his hands.

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